Yea its alright but its generic in alot of ways.
Its from Fl Studio, I already know but o well. Anywayz, its really not very good man sorry. I give ya credit for makin it so pat yourself on the back for it and accept it man! : )
Tip: Add a beat to it and really make it a nightmare dude, sacre the listener with sone crazy bass or drum beat man! Good luck on ur music and Fl studio dude!!